Thank you for the comprehensive notes! Revisions have been made at the application link, which I'll summarize here: ➤ Regarding Darkling Antiquarians, more has been added to the Background and Abilities sections, laying out the specific powers and predilections associated with Darkling Antiquarians, the Autumn Court, and how these interact with how Changelings act as a part of the Fae life cycle. Information on how the Autumn Court influences their interactions with humans has been added to the Personality section. ➤ Personality has been fleshed out, with some support from expanding the Background section. The wide and entirely inappropriate range of actions they take in response to perceived threats has been listed, including an example of how they respond to the presence of the Fae, and an impulsive act added into the Sample section.
More has been added to the Personality section to address their preferences, both positive and negative. Three major personal connections have been highlighted in both Background and Personality: to London's first Changeling boss/crush, a friend they made and lost in the course of a night, and the crooked mayor they worked for. Their relation to their local Changeling community has been expanded upon in the Personality section.
➤ The sample has been embiggened, dialog has been added, and London yeets the first NPC they meet out of sheer confusion and existential terror.
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➤ Regarding Darkling Antiquarians, more has been added to the Background and Abilities sections, laying out the specific powers and predilections associated with Darkling Antiquarians, the Autumn Court, and how these interact with how Changelings act as a part of the Fae life cycle. Information on how the Autumn Court influences their interactions with humans has been added to the Personality section.
➤ Personality has been fleshed out, with some support from expanding the Background section. The wide and entirely inappropriate range of actions they take in response to perceived threats has been listed, including an example of how they respond to the presence of the Fae, and an impulsive act added into the Sample section.
More has been added to the Personality section to address their preferences, both positive and negative. Three major personal connections have been highlighted in both Background and Personality: to London's first Changeling boss/crush, a friend they made and lost in the course of a night, and the crooked mayor they worked for. Their relation to their local Changeling community has been expanded upon in the Personality section.
➤ The sample has been embiggened, dialog has been added, and London yeets the first NPC they meet out of sheer confusion and existential terror.