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"The relationship between Inquisitors and their subordinates, as expressed in the game, is very clear-cut. Inquisitors train against each other and literally fight their way up the ranks. As Second Sister, she answers only to the Grand Inquisitor, Lord Vader and the Emperor (as Inquisitors are known to be a special, separate operation to purge the Jedi and not rank-and-file military agents). Everyone else falls under the typical line of absolute submission in the Empire, with failure and insubordination being non-options. As Darth Vader trains the Inquisitors under violence (some of them losing limbs in the process), none of them are shy about meting it out to others as an act of discipline."
"Tactics against fighting Jedi specifically can turn from physical to psychological. Listening in on communications by Cal Kestis and his crew mates, Trilla is able to learn his goals and intentions, and also who he is aligned with. Using this personal knowledge against him, manipulating his weaknesses and fears in her favor is a viable tactic to allow for possible victory. As failure for Inquisitors generally means death, they will use whatever tools in their arsenal for success."
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"The relationship between Inquisitors and their subordinates, as expressed in the game, is very clear-cut. Inquisitors train against each other and literally fight their way up the ranks. As Second Sister, she answers only to the Grand Inquisitor, Lord Vader and the Emperor (as Inquisitors are known to be a special, separate operation to purge the Jedi and not rank-and-file military agents). Everyone else falls under the typical line of absolute submission in the Empire, with failure and insubordination being non-options. As Darth Vader trains the Inquisitors under violence (some of them losing limbs in the process), none of them are shy about meting it out to others as an act of discipline."
"Tactics against fighting Jedi specifically can turn from physical to psychological. Listening in on communications by Cal Kestis and his crew mates, Trilla is able to learn his goals and intentions, and also who he is aligned with. Using this personal knowledge against him, manipulating his weaknesses and fears in her favor is a viable tactic to allow for possible victory. As failure for Inquisitors generally means death, they will use whatever tools in their arsenal for success."